Friday, September 1, 2023

What I Want Is A Friend Comments

Rating: 5.0

Closing my eyes while laying here in bed,
Like preparing my grave because I'm lifeless as a dead.
Don't know why this is happening or what it is.
The gray line is showing and sleeping into the abyss.
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Enchanting Owl
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M H 02 September 2023

I like to be your friend and read all your beautiful poems

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CJ DG 02 September 2023

'Lifeline is silent; silence is deafening.' this is a powerline, solid 5

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Acir Eryat 02 September 2023

everybody needs a friend, young poet, be sure to have a circle of friend

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Julrick Verallo 02 September 2023

'This feeling is brand new and gold pristine.' this is what I feel always, Im an extreme intovert.

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S December 01 September 2023

My goodness, your mind is so imaginative, look at this line, 'Change is financing; stagnancy is divestment.'

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S S 01 September 2023

what a beautiful poem, i am speechless

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