Monday, March 3, 2014

What I Want Comments

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I want to live a life FULL of LOVE!
I want to have good times, bad times AND in between times...
I want to smile, even when I’m mad...
I want to cry when I’m happy, not just when I'm sad!
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Catherine Hendry
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Khairul Ahsan 05 March 2014

Quite clear about what you want. The capitals are for emphasis, I understand. My best lines from your poem: 'I want to smile, even when I’m mad... I want to cry when I’m happy, not just when I'm sad! ' - And.. 'I want to be happy and comfortable in my own skin! ' Well done! Thanks for your kind words on my poem, 'You Are Not A Poet'. I appreciate.

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Catherine Hendry

Catherine Hendry

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