What I Seek? Comments

You definitely detect the vainness of ego living!

What I wished throughout life? No trouble, nice spending with wife, Children just before eyes playing,

Very poignant! A good write! Nice to go through the poem with a message.

Wished that Life should have hard going, No vehicle or rope just to toe the Boeing, Why I need continuous pet on back

What I wished throughout life? No trouble, nice spending with wife, Children just before eyes playing, I knell down before HIM and praying, ....10

My eyes stopped and took me by surprise, Alighted from winged plane to rise, I wondered and thought step so wise, One should come here and improvise,

What I wished throughout life? No trouble, nice spending with wife, Children just before eyes playing, ......10

What I wished throughout life? No trouble, nice spending with wife, Children just before eyes playing,

Wished that Life should have hard going, No vehicle or rope just to toe the Boeing, Why I need continuous pet on back? Does it not discourage and develop crack?

Little wish raising her head in corner, Trying to woe and support garner, ....10

What I wished throughout life? No trouble, nice spending with wife, ....10

What I wished throughout life? No trouble, nice spending with wife, Children just before eyes playing, I knell down before HIM and praying, .....10

What I wished throughout life? No trouble, nice spending with wife, Children just before eyes playing, .....10

i need simple life with peace....10

Good. Nicely penned.

amazing life! peaceful too! ! ! great done!

simple n peacful living....10

He blessed me with happy end, Beautiful feelings with messages send, blessingsand happy life...10

What I wished throughout life? No trouble, nice spending with wife, Children just before eyes playing, I knell down before HIM and praying, happy n easy life....10

What I wished throughout life? No trouble, nice spending with wife, Children just before eyes pl......... simple way of living only...10