Tuesday, June 23, 2009

What I See Inside Of Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

I look in the mirror

it swirls
swivels
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Marco Jimenez
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London :) 19 August 2009

i can read this poem over and over because its just so great your ae very talented. :)

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Angelic Warrior 23 June 2009

well at least it has a happy ending.....what a sad story.....man....that makes me sad.....no one should have to feel that way.....but in our day and age it is way too popular....no one is happy! .......goes to show what we've done to our world well expressed! ....a true fantastic poem :)

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London :) 23 June 2009

Wow. SO emotional. :) Beautiful Poem. :) Deserves a 10 to me.

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