What I Need Comments

Superb! Loved the way the poet has depicted the theme.5 stars

a beautiful poem....................................................

Keep moving on don't fall into the ocean the world needs you. Nice poem

I too like the way you presented these words from your heart. Thank you

Thoughtful write. Very true said in each lines.....I need eyes to see and a loving heart to love all.One cannot change anyone but one can surely change self, which is the biggest challenge in life..Loved the way you presented it so well. Thanks for sharing.

Light is flowing, In all the rivers, Seen or unseen, What I need, Some courage to swim, May be it water or the fire! A sufi like views, liked it.

Beauty is scattered all around! What we need are eyes to enjoy it and hearts large enough to accommmodate both friends and enemies! We can hardly change others, but we can always change ourselves if we are determined! Lofty thoughts, Akhtarji!

beautiful...need to find the charm around us................

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

A nice poem extolling tolerance at all levels. nice write.