'What I'M Not' Comments

The voice is breaking the ground..it sounded so strong whenever i read it and stronger as i finished it..what a great green butterfly you are! nice style of flying words..it makes poetry goes green_Soul

But the realities and the illusions clash with each other ever. As you are there alive, you have no way out and the early ousting from this transparent world by yourself is quite unfortunate. We all are here to pass through the ordeals of life which is a mixed bag of joy and pang... I liked your writing style though I do share a different philosophy of life. Let the sun shine forth...

Longing for another life to get away from the present life, is the theme, I think. Very nice is the style of write.