Saturday, September 7, 2013

What I Gained And What I Lost! Comments

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When One pearl came to my hand
I was happy to have it.
I was making a chain of pearls
Where each pearl is my one friend
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Unnikrishnan E S 07 March 2022

Although I am on this site since 2013, I have somehow missed this beautiful poem. It is said, "the choicest ornaments in one's house are his /her friends. This tribute to friendship is a gem of a poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 March 2022

However, innocent ladies like you can't do it. I read your emotions and felt very sorry about the case. Stay blessed at the other end dear poetess. It's not the only world we live in!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 March 2022

I can feel your situation dear poetess. In this virtual world evil people will take away your pears from you sans your notice. Only she or he can survive who can play the same game with them...

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Unwritten Soul 08 September 2013

Wonderful write with deep meaning-beauty appreciation of friends to beautify our life.. I am Unwritten Soul with diverse images and colors, my friends, each of them holding their soul and i swallow all of the souls to be mine, and they diverse my images to be more than before as if we eat, food be our flesh...so same thing to my friends' souls and my Unwritten soul We just a big cloud now...that share same sunshine and pour the teardrops together in one company_Soul

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 07 September 2013

Thanks a lot for such a nice poem/Friends are my pearls...Each of you are my pearls. so nice of ou

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 07 September 2013

Gain one pearl and lose one. This cannot continue. Lock the other end to retain friends. Nice idea. Nice poem with a message. Thank you.

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Shraddha The Poetess 07 September 2013

last lines were quite impressive..........vry beautiful.... i invite u to read my poems spcllyyyy hindii ones.....

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 September 2013

beautiful poem.thanks for sharing Geetha.loved it.

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 September 2013

beautiful drop.thanks for sharing Geetha.loved it.

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Neela Nath Das 07 September 2013

Geethu, your concept is really stupendous.Friends are like pearl.We must not lose them.Great!

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