Friday, September 9, 2005

'What I Felt I Had To Do' Comments

Rating: 3.8

This is something for someone very special he knows who he is I can't explane
it right now I did what i felt i had to do

You asked me if i loved yes this i do i said i would never leave you and turned
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Tineyjo Langley
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Unnamed Unnamed 10 September 2005

Hey there. The only thing I can really say is that there are some punctuation and grammatical errors here. If you want me to tell you what they are, I'd be happy to tell you, but I'm sure you could find it. How old are you? I'm 17. Go read my poem 'From Brown to Green' and give me brutal honesty about it please. What I like about your poem here is that you sound genuinely hurt and I like that I have no idea what happened to you. It's mysterious, you know? Alright, I'll talk to yeh.

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