Friday, April 28, 2006

What I Deserve...! Comments

Rating: 5.0

As usual the sun rises
‘N it has to set
Life goes on…. as
It will never end…
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Konjit Berhane
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Deanna More 02 June 2006

.. Konjit, this is a very ponderous poem! In fact, one could ponder thought for hours, trying to decide if these words could be relative to their own lives. (I chuckled a little when I visualized my despicable SPIDER saying these lines aloud, as if he was having a Bad-Conscience attack! : -) Great poem! (10 - for you!) Deanna xx ..

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Peter A. Crowther 12 May 2006

Quirky poem and a funny ending that made me laugh.

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Moya Levy 04 May 2006

I don't think that anyone ever deserves to die. Even those who have committed evil crimes (in sure you haven't lol) should live, face up to the consequences of their actions! Anyway off me soap box lol! Moyaxx

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