Thursday, January 5, 2017

What I Can Be Comments

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What I can be has always been a part of me
A part of the heart that I never set free
Concealed in time like a distant memory
The person that I am still waiting to be
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Bryan Norton
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Yehualashet Teshome 16 April 2020

A great and insightful poem. Thank you

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A B FANIKI 07 October 2019

A VERY THOUGHTFUL AND INSIGHTFUL POEM. THANKS FOR SHARING IT IS BRILLIANT

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 August 2018

deeds of kindness, admiring others, inspiring others, take time to l ove others.. a friend to set my heart on fire. all lovely points that you are elucidating dear poet. thank u very much. tony

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 02 July 2018

Truly inspiration write... I'll like to read it when am faced with life's tribulations in this life's marathon and trials. Elegantly written artwork.10+++

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Tom Allport 28 April 2017

a positively good poem of what can be if we look closely enough to actually see one another in a different light? ....................well written.

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Laurie Van Der Hart 05 January 2017

Bryan, this is such a lovely, thought-provoking poem! I'm so glad I stumbled upon it. You have inspired me to strive to be the person that I am still waiting to be.. Very well written.

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