Wednesday, February 8, 2006

What I Am Worth Comments

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I walked through those streets
I bowed my head
I left my dreams
When I left my bed
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victoria martinez
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merc gabriell 09 February 2006

your poem's speaker seems to have a dual personality. this moment, she downplays and belittles her strength, courage and essence as a person/woman. next moment, she convinces herself that she is worth more than what is precious. there's an inner struggle that can be detected here. in psychiatry, it's called 'borderline personality disorder' you express the emotion so succintly. outstanding piece.

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