Friday, November 5, 2004

What I Am Comments

Rating: 3.7

I stand,
Balanced on a cliff's edge-
The height, strangely, does not bother me.
I fall,
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James Grengs
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Chanda Panda 05 November 2004

Powerful indeed. I like the way you did these lines: Love, life, hope, laughter, joy, peace. Hate, death, despair, silence, sorrow, war. I like how you lined up the 'opposite' emotions respectively.

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knot Available 05 November 2004

Very powerful! I like it.

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James Grengs

James Grengs

Attleboro, MA
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