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I'm a mountain rising mysterious on the distant horizon
I'm a valley mist rising mystic above the quiet river
I'm a waterfall falling in tumbles deep and tumultuous
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But mostly. I'm the lips of moonlight on your face I'm the fingers of cool night breezes playing in your hair I'm the sun rising in your early morning blue eyes
I am pleased that you found beauty and inspiration in this, my dear poetess
Fantastic verse, Susan. I think it is far more profound to ask 'What am I? ' than 'Who am I? '
M.J. you and your comments are instructive and full of wisdom--thank you for your friendship through the years
Susan, I was totally blown away by the majestic beauty of this CREATION. Indeed, God was smiling as you were writing it!
You are my booster shot! ! ! Whenever I; m running low confidence, there you are! !
1/ A good poem, whenever you read it, reveals different aspects of its creations. Here in the first stanza we find a poet has been generalized who is embodied in the wonders and beauty of the universe,
SORAN, i love it when you read my poetry and get under the hood of a poem and check out its mechanics! You make me feel that my poem reached out and touched both mind and heart. Thank you for considering me worth the effort
2nd part/ whereas in the second stanza we collect attractive poetic images of the poet revolving around a special center and reflecting her inner beauties.
I'm the thought wandering through your mind I'm the memory haunting your dreams
I'm the lips of moonlight on your face I'm the fingers of cool night breezes playing in your hair
I had to return here to read this once again. Such beauty, such weight and power to the words. I do love this poem.
Thank you for the stars and for making this one of your favorites--that is the highest compliment that can be given. PH should set up a section for writers to applaud those who understand the mechanics of writing
Part 2.. but we have seen both coexisting time and again. The metaphors used here complement each other so excellently that we feel as if we are climbing a flight of stairs.
Oh! ! ! ! feel as if you are climbing a flight of stairs----what an awesomely lovely way to delve into this poem. Thank you dear friend for getting under the hood of so many poems! !
PH didn't post my comments replying to your comments--I particularkly liked this refenence to fllight of stairs--you are a great encourager as well as poet, my dear friend
Marvellous poem. While the first depicts the powerful aspect of human personality, that tends to control the universe, the second part denotes its soft loving and lovable state. Seemingly in sharp contrast with one another, but
Unnikrishnan! ! ! ! How I love your comments. They instruct and guide and improve my efforts! You are a jewel of a fellow writer and friend. PH would be a flat site if it were not for you and your beautiful story poems and your friendship with so many of us here. God bless you and keep you safe.
Hey Linda thank you for your enjoyment of this piece and thank you for the five stars I read that you gave this. You are a peach!
Linda, Thank you for reading and your comment on it was very encouraging
You are everything, Susan. I have missed your talented writings and it's good to see you posting again.
Kim Barney! ! ! It has been a long time, hasn't it? I wish I could say I'll be here more often but I am drowning under the book I am editing and hoping to find an agent for. Frankly, I miss you all very much and miss reading your thoughts on the world we live in. for.
Surely, this is one of the most beautiful, sanguine love poems, or songs for that matter, that I have ever heard. Absolutely incredible. Superb in it's wonder.
Smoky, it pleases me when your caliber of a poet enjoyed this poem... I treasure your words very much
Beautiful poetry in its images and deep in its meanings, the theme connects us with nature and the universe in order to understand through them the sincere feelings of true love for our poet Susan
Soran, my friend, the response to this poem has given me the desire to continue writing poetry==I am so wound up in editing my novel that I have not had any fire in me to write a poem lately--thank you for your kind response to this piece
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Susan, You seem to have 'worn a l ot of hats'! ! I really think you have a Multiple-personality Disorder! ! ! See a shrink; I DO HAVE a license, but you'll have come to my office in Sri Lanka. : ) Dr. Bri, at your service.