Tuesday, May 10, 2011

What Her Right? ? ? Comments

Rating: 3.6

Her beauty i describe,
i lack words but i want use words right snow
when it falls on her face
i cant descriminate which one is white....
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Farah Ilyas
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Heather Wilkins 05 August 2013

and this is what she deserves. well written.

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R.j. Wynn 17 June 2013

Same as yours I will say with humility.

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Hribhu Dey 11 May 2011

dear farah u write nicely..u sent me message..i failed to rply from my inbox... Plz read my poem INTROSPECTION thanks

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 10 May 2011

I like it. You have described it very well. Vivid imagery and remarkable style. Great write. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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Farah Ilyas

Farah Ilyas

Faisalabad, Pakistan
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