Sunday, May 4, 2014

What Heaven Is This Comments

Rating: 5.0

What heaven is this, before my eyes,
Where far beyond, veiled mountains rise,
And lush green pastures ‘neath my feet
Yet urge my heart to faster beat.
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Valerie Dohren
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Amitava Sur 07 June 2014

What a lovely detailing of this beautiful earth, you saw the heaven here itself.... Loved it

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* Sunprincess * 05 June 2014

.......so beautifully written, truly this write deserves a gold medal....every word to me is like a little piece of heaven.... .........................................................~~~~~~ love love love ~~~~~~............................................

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Lucifera Santez 25 May 2014

love it val. its amazing. :)

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Shahzia Batool 15 May 2014

The free flowing soul of the poet cannot be caged in the strict rhyming prison...keep flowing with expression! ! ! !

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Lyn Paul 11 May 2014

Amazing last verse Valerie. Beautifully written x

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Mary Forrester 09 May 2014

Wonderful poem Valerie, you are my favourite poet, , you touch my heart every time! ! !

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Heavenly poem. After life may be delightful. Thank you.

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 06 May 2014

a thought-provoking and interesting poem...well done!

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Valsa George 06 May 2014

This is heaven indeed....! Beautiful!

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Georgios Venetopoulos 05 May 2014

Very well expressed poem. Your talent is evident. Thank you for it.

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Shobana Gomes 05 May 2014

Absolutely gorgeous poem.

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Hazel Durham 05 May 2014

Lines of such beauty and truth that soar with wings to new heights of bliss, a paradise where the light is eternal! Outstanding write Val!

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John Brown 05 May 2014

Glorious poem Val. I love it.

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Dave Walker 05 May 2014

A beautiful poem, heaven is what is waiting for us when it is our time, what we see or visualise before we die is our part of heaven. A great write.

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Om Chawla 04 May 2014

As I read this poem [ I have already read it thrice] my mind got the dictate: 'Just close your eyes and visualise..Here is heaven.' It is a wonderful wonderful poem, Val.

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Mary Forrester 04 May 2014

A beautiful poem Valerie.

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