What heaven is this, before my eyes,
Where far beyond, veiled mountains rise,
And lush green pastures ‘neath my feet
Yet urge my heart to faster beat.
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.......so beautifully written, truly this write deserves a gold medal....every word to me is like a little piece of heaven.... .........................................................~~~~~~ love love love ~~~~~~............................................
The free flowing soul of the poet cannot be caged in the strict rhyming prison...keep flowing with expression! ! ! !
Wonderful poem Valerie, you are my favourite poet, , you touch my heart every time! ! !
Heavenly poem. After life may be delightful. Thank you.
Very well expressed poem. Your talent is evident. Thank you for it.
Lines of such beauty and truth that soar with wings to new heights of bliss, a paradise where the light is eternal! Outstanding write Val!
A beautiful poem, heaven is what is waiting for us when it is our time, what we see or visualise before we die is our part of heaven. A great write.
As I read this poem [ I have already read it thrice] my mind got the dictate: 'Just close your eyes and visualise..Here is heaven.' It is a wonderful wonderful poem, Val.
What a lovely detailing of this beautiful earth, you saw the heaven here itself.... Loved it