Saturday, April 12, 2008

What He Doesn'T Know Won'T Hurt Him Either Comments

Rating: 5.0

Blurred by too much rum and too little cola.
His eyes roll out the red carpet onto his cheeks
just beyond the reach of his dehydrated tongue; hours
of cunnilingus had left him thirstier than a dried
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Ted Sheridan
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How do you manage to be touching when you are being so down-to-earth, in-yer-face, warts-and-all type black comedian? Cos you're you, is why, i guess. t x

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Astute, and entertaining work, my friend....Befit for an oral read, indeed! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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LOVEFOOL Aka 12 April 2008

Nice work I like the twist at the end very funny Nik

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