! ! ! ! What Have We Become'...? ? ? Comments

It is fantastic, incredible write! Thank you!

This is wonderful! Although the content is unfortunate, I still find it such a good read. I have missed reading your poetry very much! You don't mean my Literature teacher, do you?

So sad to see the beginning of the end of a relationship. The handwriting is on the wall, and it's all downhill from there. The unfinished sentences, the things left unsaid, words that stick in your throat - because of obstinacy or hurt pride? What does it matter? There is no easy way - endings are always painful. This is so heartfelt, crushing, and extremely sad. A powerful read. Linda

''There are reasons for the dense forest of absurdities; there is philosophy in the mindless mire of our shared obstinacy '' very deeply cognitive visual metaphor..........excellent poem...10++++

a very expressive poem in a wonderful way penned..10++++ There are half finished sentences barbs of whose alphabets herald all virgin conversations and…. There are missed heartbeats a grip of fear permanently situated on the neck of unformed words

'There are half finished sentences barbs of whose alphabets herald all virgin conversations and….' An excellent composition, melodious. 10+++

another superb write indeed....you've a beautiful talent to convert feelings into words sir...bravo bravo 10++++++ nd +++++A

This is excellent Bhayya! Golden words flowed like lava of knowledge and wisdom and beauty. High imagery..................you won my 10

of all the tweaking i did the one bit i left untouched was my most fav bit: 'There are missed heartbeats a grip of fear permanently situated on the neck of unformed words '........ exactly that.!

'There are missed heartbeats a grip of fear permanently situated on the neck of unformed words '........ I could just sit and read these lines for days and still get new inspirations from them....awesome.

this just suits my mood at the moment...tha'ts a good read, rehan...something similar to this i posted 'affaire de coeur: xxiii or xxii' i'm not very sure...