What Have I Done? Comments

this is a really said poem it made me cry and i feel the someway you do and you are a awesome poem writer and i love it.

i could see you words and feel the regret. i like it. i hope this hard time comes to pass though and i am also glad that the gun hasn't been fired yet. better days await you david longoria. just you wait.

Ahhh how sad: (i am so sorry you felt that way.

We could do anything wrong we feel regret too...or sometimes the pain is beyond our mind can endure...but sure we can endure, but it just too pain in time...even leave a scar, somehow when we decide for something wrong could be it is another big mistake we took..i dont know what make you feel sad but sure ending the breathe is not solving anything and we just end it with the baddest way...there's always great reason for you to go and cheers..it just a moment of time when you feel time so hard, i believe you will pass it soon and find great time later.._Unwritten Soul

Hi David, you have a wonderful way to express yourself.. Never under estimate your self.. Everyone in this world is unique.. No one can ever take your place.. God Bless You, Keep writing :)

'just always know your important david, and without you, this world will be made all the less magnificent '

I jus twant to let u know one thing nothing is ur fault so dont believe that i know i need to take my own advice because i feel the same way u do it better to end a life then keep living out the same horrible life

yes, i understood the pain i only want to share one thing-the worst thing a person would feel is self-pity never let this enter your system for if it does it will eat you out many people will relate with your poem you are good at telling a story very nice

wow this is sooo great that it made me cry amazing breath taking wonderful just amazing

Wow. This has alot of emotions. I love the fact that you made it rhyme and put so much emotion into it. Nice write

Wow this is amazing, great rhyming, and strong emotions.

you are never alone not when you have people near you tht you may not even now yet that care about you. you cant just give up ur life i want tp do that so any times in my own life but i never have the brains to do tht so keep your head up and you will be just fine

You are alone! We all learn the hard and painful ways how to survive and see the World through a magnifying glass! We eventually move on facing the Sun without going blind and once we successfully buried our pasts we then feel liberated! This is indeed a beautiful and well penned write! 10+++ Keep it up! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...