We go day by day
Through night to sun
What is there to do?
I hear the voices,
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From this and the other poems you have written, I can infer you've had (or are having) a very difficult life. And you use writing poetry to express your feelings in a way you usually otherwise can't. :) That's what writing's for! :) The poetry is very emotional and deep, and you perfect every aspect of a poem that there can be. Simply amazing. Keep writing! -Zander
I believe there deleted now... I have no idea how the three exact same comments got on there......