Tuesday, September 1, 2009
What Happens To Smiles Comments
Rating: ★0.0
What happens to a smile
dose it fade away
like lost memories
or is it always ready to peak again
...
Read full text
COMMENTS
Best Poems
Best Member Poems
Best Classical Poems
New Poems
New Poets
Best Member Poets
Best Classical Poets
Explore Poems
Explore Poets
Poem Of The Day
Love Poems
Baby Poems
Death Poems
Sad Poems
Birthday Poems
Wedding Poems
Nature Poems
Sorry Poems
Hero Poems
Poetry E-Books
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
7/27/2025 7:35:03 AM # 1.0.0
This is a great one, full of rich, original, provocative, entertaining similes. Without mentioning explicitly what you are feeling, you leave the reader wondering about it. Everything looks great except the last line, which is a bit cliche and anticlimatic. If you can rework that it will be perfect.