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What Happens After Comments
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Slowly pain emerges
Once happy smiles
Follow by a hundred miles
The heavy bag
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Abhida Kafle
27 October 2025
Please let me know how I can improve my poetry. This is my first poem.
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11/15/2025 7:22:53 AM # 1.0.0
For a first poem its incredibly powerful and stirring. I think its raw and honest. Suicide leaves a hole where their shouldn't be. Thank you I hope you write more
Thank you so much. I definitely will!