Tuesday, July 18, 2006

What Happened To Our Horrible World Comments

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what happen to the world
there is no safe to say a word
as if you are fighting in a sowrd
we can't feel rest
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abdulrahman muhmmad
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Linda Ori 20 July 2006

And living in peace is mine, also. I weep for your suffering, and I wish I had the power to make it go away. My only power is in writing poems to spread the word around the world - it is time for peace for ALL nations. I hear you, and I pray for you and your family and your countrymen. We are not all warmongers - we are the peacemakers, and through this site may we bond together for a better world. God Bless You, Linda

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Donny S 20 July 2006

wow........ I'm actually quite speechless....this is a brilliantly written poem - and I love the way you've incorporated all your ideas into a rhyme... Brilliant write....! ! ! Keep up the good work Mr. Muhmmad....a definite 10/10 rating for this! It's also going in my favourite poems list. Take care, - Dona -

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