Tuesday, June 11, 2013

What Happened By Itself Comments

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At the rain falling from the sky I looked,
Why does it rain, asked my questioning mind,
Who planned the water cycle and then took,
The water to life of every kind
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Syed Mizbahuddeen
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Mizbahuddeen Syed 10 July 2013

@abdulwhhab thank you for your comments.... you can always let me know if you have a tip to make it better.... thank you

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Raabia Tabassum 06 July 2013

Great poem. Keep GOING: D

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Wahab Abdul 12 June 2013

nice one.. i liked it.. keep writing..

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Syed Mizbahuddeen

Syed Mizbahuddeen

Pallavaram, Chennai
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