Wednesday, October 26, 2016

What Happened? Comments

Rating: 3.5

broken promises confined within the agony of not holding you
eating away at the soul
and with each gnaw another emotion surges
understood nothing's understood
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Axel Rivera
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Poet Dismas 26 October 2016

The repetition captured me, and i felt the agony. What happened?

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 October 2016

Broken promises! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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