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Your poems sound like your a person who would love to make the world a better place. good job. One of the best poetry's we can find in helping the world is the oldest book ever written - the Bible.

Very well written poem (: it is sad to think what the world is coming to these days, and your poem captures it perfectly. I find the beginning the most amazing, because it is true we learn from our mistakes! But there are people in this world who are cold and ignorant of that fact, mainly because someone has been equally ignorant to them. Your cry of injustice is crystal clear. Very well defined! People can learn a lot from a poem like this (:

I know that the people in this world can be very cruel but I refuse to stay in my room. I will not stand by and do nothing with the gifts God gave me to make a difference.

What a paradox of life! A perfect poem in disarray world...thanks you and God bless...10 +++