Thursday, April 26, 2012

What Good Are Dreams Comments

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What good are dreams,
If I must awake?
When with first light,
My love you forsake.
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Juan Olivarez
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 08 May 2012

Great rhyme, rhythm, flow, and theme - perfect write!

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Claudia Krizay 01 May 2012

So much truth in this poem, Juan, and beautifully written!

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Valerie Dohren 29 April 2012

Beautiful poem Juan, enjoyed the read.

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Wendy Thopliss 28 April 2012

Keep dreaming Juan, sometimes dreams are all we have left. Beautiful, great read.

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Heather Wilson 28 April 2012

Lovely poem, keep dreaming they might, just might come true. I loved the rhyme.

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