Once he left me,
once he ofended me,
once he broke my heart,
and once I cried.
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What goes around comes back around, in diferent way, in a different time, but it still does the same to the heart oHHH I know how it hurts when it comes around! ! ! .... this is a great one indeed..filled with emtions..10++ with love shan.
Very profoundly written ana, and to learn from life, no matter how difficult it was/is, to take something good with you, to find through the burning aching pain, to find a positve feeling in your heart, is one of life's secrets.... There are no guraentee's with life/ love, but a learning lesson is something we all learn, to some it is bliss, to others it is painfull, but the bottom line is the same lesson teaches us yet another mystery of life..... Very very tenderly written, and penned from within the walls of your heart..........
a natural flow in this poem....very true what goes around comes back...just like every action has a reaction....10
so true what Goes Around Comes Back Around......nice theme and nicely penned........ good work
Love reveals itself in so many ways, Ana...love...the joy and grief both, we get out of it are there in the air...like virus...never know wtat would catch whom...nice poem...thanks...10
It is as transparent as the other side of the heart, yet the beats are in the way..what makes it start and never flow away in such a simple tear you shed for both...iip
What goes around comes back around, in diferent way, in a different time, but it still does the same to the heart. well done..its really a good and very much impressive poem..liked it..written well and professioanlly....10++++++++++