Monday, July 20, 2009

(what Force Refuses, Time Shall Do) Comments

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When I journey on jade grass blades,
They harshly bend beneath my feet,
And though their tips and soil meet-
My footsteps do not make them stay.
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Lazarus Knix
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Lady Grace 23 July 2009

this is beautiful..pull back the arrow and release to its fullest..this poem tells a nice scene..

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Patrick A. Martin 23 July 2009

beautiful Lazarus I love the last two lines but the whole piece is genius

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