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beautiful poetry! congratulations! you have written so well deserves more than 10

A beautiful poem.....Highly meaningful and creative, more than your age Elbert. last lines dampened my heart......10/10.

Such a beautiful heartfelt poem....well written...thank you

A DEEP POEM AND AGAIN I SHED JUST A TEAR: -) ! ! ! ! YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER, JUST BECAME ONE OF YOUR BIGGEST FANS

Definitely something we all feel from time to time...well said and best wishes...Jeff.