Thursday, March 22, 2018

What Else He Can Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dawn breaks with the cats' meowing voices
And whistles of eagles flying close to the earth
A man who has passed his night in dreaming vices
Tears in his eyes, underestimating his worth
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 March 2018

A thought provoking poem beautifully crafted. Sometimes men seek first the call of his fellow men than the Kingdom of the Almighty. God is the ultimate provider of everything. In Him we depend for everything. Wonderful piece.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 March 2018

Meowing voices of the cat breaks dawn. A man who has passed his night in dreaming vices has found tears. The person is wise who goes to the mosque for the prayers. God's grace he feels in true heart. God provides wisdom as food to wise person and he serves selflessly for mankind. Hunger provokes thought. A kind person feels hunger of another person. This is a thought provoking as well as thoughtful poem...10

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Rini shibu 22 March 2018

Hunger of every living creature so nicely depicted here, always we forget that God is our provider

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Nudershada Cabanes 22 March 2018

Beautifully pennedpoem verse Sir Akhtar image filled poem.10

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