tears of pain and sorrow continue to fall for what seems forever
no hope of light or happiness can be seen in the distance
only the endless cutting into the heart till it is split open
little possibility of removing the cold sharp knife that cuts on
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So utterly sad. Sabrina, your writing, with ease hits this reader like a ton of bricks.. Your ability to share the sadest and darkest of emotion is simply astonishing.. My only suggestion would be to try and smooth out the pace of the piece.. But Fantastic work... I look forward to readin' more typo sole = soul