I had a vision or was it a dream…
In meditation I was completely immersed
I saw an image flying in a darkened sky
Its fiery wings spanned the universe
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Sounds to me like you were carried in spirit by an awakening of your soul within.good poem.My dream poem is Added Dimensions: Beyond the Portal.. a ten from me..congratulations..
A lovely written poem... I vote 10+++ congrats on chosen as the PoD
Dreams need not always have meanings. Bits and pieces one may collect after opening the yes, may have some connections to little little things in real life'.What ever that may be, poets articulation of words and phrases to a rhythmic pattern in verse form is both credible and creditable. Congrats for being the member's PoD. X
A beautiful poem touchingly penned. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.
'Cloaked in mystery' are the visions and dreams. A poem of rhythm and some rhyme that conveys the experience so well.
My interpretation as a witness, I could not attest I am a delusional wide-eyed expert in a maze Apparent forces intervene and take charge Lifting with radar sensors to the unknown Cloaked in mystery; protecting my wellbeing......this is true we all poets especially have such apparitions and intuitive and imaginative happenings in our lives......... thank You dear Poetess. tony
the understanding of -What Does It Mean? My interpretation as a witness, I could not attest I am a delusional wide-eyed expert in a maze ////is this in hallucination! nicely executed this poem
I had a vision or was it a dream… In meditation I was completely immersed.... Great write, especially the opening lines which starts with a question. Congratulations on your poem being selected for poem of the day.
Some dreams leave an impression unforgettable. We wish to know their meaning and purpose but what you said in the end summarizes best. Those hidden powers in us take charge. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem on mysteries of mind and congratulations for member poem place.
An upbeat tune just for you to listen too. Taking in every word. Don't despair you're not alone. Not for too long. I'm safe: alone again, naturally for you. Congratulation! ! !
Amazing dreams always stay with us and are unforgettable and in some cases unfathomable..good work..a ten..
A smoothly composed, jaunty retelling of a dream─or was it a vision? A reminder that there is more to existence than that which can be detected and measured by material sensors. The universal experience of something greater than the physical universe. Some would call it a biochemical reaction to not-fully-digested pizza, but if we allow ourselves the freedom to operate beyond our physical senses, we will find that we are equipped to exist as more than just a collection of bioelectrically charged compounds.
As I pondered, this is what I got… The reason for happenings are not always shown Apparent forces intervene and take charge Lifting with radar sensors to the unknown Cloaked in mystery; protecting my wellbeing - - - - - - - - -We are small beings controlled by the Superior being.What we experience in a dream state or in deep meditation might be carrying some message which we are not able to understand..A nice poem, thanks for sharing.
You may not believe this, but I had a very very similar dream. So I was totally immersed in this poem. I could feel shivers running down my spine. And I'm in total agreement with your last stanza! ! ! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this Poem Of The Day. Theresa Ann, congratulations on a well deserved honour! ! ! !
a poem of mysterious forces at work maybe? .............well written
Dreams or vision comes from super mind to beautify real life. Here is a beautiful depiction of dream or vision made by you immensely. Let some lines be quoted.... As I pondered, this is what I got… The reason for happenings are not always shown Apparent forces intervene and take charge Lifting with radar sensors to the unknown Cloaked in mystery; protecting my wellbeing. Thanks for sharing and congratulation for poem of the day.
Such a great poem, Theresa... congrats on being chosen.... Rated 10++++
Thank You for sharing these words. I too have a similar vision and now feel protected with this. It is a beautiful feeling that happens often.