Friday, November 16, 2007

What Does It Mean? Comments

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I had a vision or was it a dream…
In meditation I was completely immersed
I saw an image flying in a darkened sky
Its fiery wings spanned the universe
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Theresa Ann Moore
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Lyn Paul 31 July 2018

Thank You for sharing these words. I too have a similar vision and now feel protected with this. It is a beautiful feeling that happens often.

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Sounds to me like you were carried in spirit by an awakening of your soul within.good poem.My dream poem is Added Dimensions: Beyond the Portal.. a ten from me..congratulations..

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 31 July 2018

A lovely written poem... I vote 10+++ congrats on chosen as the PoD

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 31 July 2018

Dreams need not always have meanings. Bits and pieces one may collect after opening the yes, may have some connections to little little things in real life'.What ever that may be, poets articulation of words and phrases to a rhythmic pattern in verse form is both credible and creditable. Congrats for being the member's PoD. X

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 July 2018

A beautiful poem touchingly penned. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

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Adrian Flett 31 July 2018

'Cloaked in mystery' are the visions and dreams. A poem of rhythm and some rhyme that conveys the experience so well.

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Kim Barney 31 July 2018

Congrats on poem of the day. An intriguing poem...

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Dr Antony Theodore 31 July 2018

My interpretation as a witness, I could not attest I am a delusional wide-eyed expert in a maze Apparent forces intervene and take charge Lifting with radar sensors to the unknown Cloaked in mystery; protecting my wellbeing......this is true we all poets especially have such apparitions and intuitive and imaginative happenings in our lives......... thank You dear Poetess. tony

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Mahtab Bangalee 31 July 2018

the understanding of -What Does It Mean? My interpretation as a witness, I could not attest I am a delusional wide-eyed expert in a maze ////is this in hallucination! nicely executed this poem

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Jeanette Telusma 31 July 2017

I had a vision or was it a dream… In meditation I was completely immersed.... Great write, especially the opening lines which starts with a question. Congratulations on your poem being selected for poem of the day.

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Savita Tyagi 31 July 2017

Some dreams leave an impression unforgettable. We wish to know their meaning and purpose but what you said in the end summarizes best. Those hidden powers in us take charge. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem on mysteries of mind and congratulations for member poem place.

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Christina Simmons 31 July 2017

An upbeat tune just for you to listen too. Taking in every word. Don't despair you're not alone. Not for too long. I'm safe: alone again, naturally for you. Congratulation! ! !

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Amazing dreams always stay with us and are unforgettable and in some cases unfathomable..good work..a ten..

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Seamus O Brian 31 July 2017

A smoothly composed, jaunty retelling of a dream─or was it a vision? A reminder that there is more to existence than that which can be detected and measured by material sensors. The universal experience of something greater than the physical universe. Some would call it a biochemical reaction to not-fully-digested pizza, but if we allow ourselves the freedom to operate beyond our physical senses, we will find that we are equipped to exist as more than just a collection of bioelectrically charged compounds.

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Bharati Nayak 31 July 2017

As I pondered, this is what I got… The reason for happenings are not always shown Apparent forces intervene and take charge Lifting with radar sensors to the unknown Cloaked in mystery; protecting my wellbeing - - - - - - - - -We are small beings controlled by the Superior being.What we experience in a dream state or in deep meditation might be carrying some message which we are not able to understand..A nice poem, thanks for sharing.

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Richard Wlodarski 31 July 2017

You may not believe this, but I had a very very similar dream. So I was totally immersed in this poem. I could feel shivers running down my spine. And I'm in total agreement with your last stanza! ! ! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this Poem Of The Day. Theresa Ann, congratulations on a well deserved honour! ! ! !

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Tom Allport 31 July 2017

a poem of mysterious forces at work maybe? .............well written

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 July 2017

Dreams or vision comes from super mind to beautify real life. Here is a beautiful depiction of dream or vision made by you immensely. Let some lines be quoted.... As I pondered, this is what I got… The reason for happenings are not always shown Apparent forces intervene and take charge Lifting with radar sensors to the unknown Cloaked in mystery; protecting my wellbeing. Thanks for sharing and congratulation for poem of the day.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 31 July 2017

Such a great poem, Theresa... congrats on being chosen.... Rated 10++++

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Bernard Snyder 31 July 2016

An amazing poem. Well done Ms. Moore!

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