Thursday, January 30, 2014

What Does It Matter! Comments

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What does it matter if sunshine fails,
And my sky's not always blue;
What does it matter.... I'm not upset
If I know I belong to you
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Lora Colon
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Bri Edwards 08 February 2014

another great write. i'll add you to MyPoetLIst. i wish some woman/women had written this for me! of course then i would be self-conscious if i had to let her/them go. i might even like it if a man wrote this for me....as a friend OF COURSE! :) bri thanks for sharing. p.s. i usually don't go for love poems, but i'll make an exception in this case.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 31 January 2014

the climaxing two lines are so full of pathos, I paused and felt saddened.

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David Lessard 30 January 2014

Belonging to someone is the essential matter. Lovely, soul bearing beauty in this one Lora.

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