What Do You See What Do You Hear? Comments

I completely understand you. becuase i have friends that take the time to stop what there doing and go outside and listen and see all that happens. But, i do and i'm happy about it because it is so beauitful and i luv that way you took the time and try to get people to understand that there is more to life then what me the eye and that is an expression that i use most of the time and speaking of time lol... can you plz get time to read any of my poems or all of them and there are 18. Because I'm trying to gt peoples comments on them and i want to know if they are good and that is one that is called 'my teacher loves her iPod' and that is the one i wrote when i was 6.....so please if you have time read then and write me back and i do hope you get this.................................Im sorryt his thing is so long LUV, Jade

This is a real poem. It has the musical quality that I listen for when I read. You are to be congratulated young lady. Your style is rather smoothe naturaly in this one. I'll read another. GW62