Thursday, January 23, 2014

What Do You See? Comments

Rating: 3.2

Who do you see when you look at me?
Do you see joyful laughs and happy smiles, and think oh what a pretty doll we see?
Do you see the hidden tear and frightful fears, and shake your head and that broken thing?
Broken doll or Barbie doll, which do I appear?
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Jessica Dehn
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Amber Griggs 05 February 2014

It's like you took the feelings, and thoughts right out of my head and molded them into perfect words! I to feel this way! I see a strong beautiful Doll who out shines Barbie any day; P p.s I love how my verification code is 666 lol

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Khairul Ahsan 03 February 2014

A short, beautiful poem this is! 'What do you see when you look at me? ' - A question not always asked, but always 'a soul in love' wants to inquire from her/his lover. Hmm...Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder!

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Donnie Wolff 25 January 2014

I see a poetic sadness, but I guess that's what makes us who we are. Nice poem

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