Saturday, March 22, 2008

What Do You See? Comments

Rating: 4.5

When you look at me
What do you see?
A teenage girl
With a heart filled with hope
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lindsey kidd
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Dislocated Heart 01 April 2008

This is a great piece, two sides to the story..nicely writen.. its one girl with two side.. one thats what she use to be.. and the one she is now. heartbroken, with less hope.. love will find you again in the future, hope comes along with it. it might seem dark now.. just wait the light will come. better days will shine again.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 22 March 2008

i saw a girl is in dilemma.......to get the real meaning of humanisation......good and bad.........pretty and ugly........hate and love..........a dilemma...

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