Friday, October 17, 2008

What Do You Do? Comments

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What do you do when everything seems to fall
Like you've lost it all
Everything runs in circles in your head
When you're laying in bed
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the answer is...talk to god, he changes evrything, may be nt the way we want, but sure that is gud for us...a butiful write, heal up ur emotions..

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Carol Bryant 21 October 2008

Really outstanding! It is one thing to feel the pain, another to write about it, and something pretty extraordinary to let others see it~putting yourself out there raw emotions and all! Thanks for sharing

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Jessica Jemima 17 October 2008

You write a poem ;) That's what you do! Very nice I like the rhymes. Good work! Keep up the writing and find the answer! =)

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