Wednesday, January 27, 2016

What Do We Need? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Not so clean attire he was there,
scratching the head to explore,
the varieties of dishes and the smell,
I was watching him in a spell,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Ratnakar Mandlik 27 January 2016

Fantastic revelation of the minutest aspects of human nature as also psyche that wants to grab the things more than necessary and take for granted the kind donors. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 January 2016

Wonderful experience is expressed in poem and life of a needy man is perfectly observed. Interesting sharing done definitely.10

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