Monday, June 20, 2011

What Difference Will Make One Sin? Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have committed many a sin,
big, small and wee.
and before committing every sin,
i tremble and think and think?
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Arfa Iris
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You need to see, Gods Love as motivatIon, Jesus died for all your sin, from cradle to grave, we all fall short, my friend..do not be discouraged, just dont sin with intention, that is a no. well written from the heart

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Philip Jose 22 June 2011

good depiction, yes, human beings are always inclined to do what is forbidden.dont worry it is our basic nature, Allah knows it better than us

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Adrian Shorey 21 June 2011

This is amazing, far better than anything I've ever made, although it's just my opinion.... But, this poem almost brought a tear to my eye, sorry if it sounds odd but, the feelings explained in this poem and the reason for them are things I often think of myself.

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Hribhu Dey 21 June 2011

self-interrogation may help bring in some answers...nice proceed...luv Hribhu

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 21 June 2011

Surely one more sin doesn't make any difference if it is atone for. So always ready to seek forgiveness when you commit any sin. Lovely write. A perfect 10.

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Romeo Della Valle 20 June 2011

A very well penned and poignant write! 10+++Keep it up! Love and Peace for always!

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Arfa Iris

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hyderabad, A.P, India.
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