A top-of-the-line poem, Nicholas! But do correct the double negative: But I can’t take your lies no more. Change to either: But I can't take your lies any more. OR But I can take your lies no more. OR But I can't take your lies... No more! (And I really hope she stops lying to you!)
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A top-of-the-line poem, Nicholas! But do correct the double negative: But I can’t take your lies no more. Change to either: But I can't take your lies any more. OR But I can take your lies no more. OR But I can't take your lies... No more! (And I really hope she stops lying to you!)