Tuesday, April 3, 2007

What Did I Do So Wrong Comments

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The day we fell apart was the day i just broke apart
The day you said no more that was day i fell in soro

What ever did i do to hurt you so bad
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tom Le Guilcher
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Corey Threet 28 April 2007

Yea I feel the same as Rebecca this poem is really good even tho I prefer rhyming poems this was really nice keep it up

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Rebecca Pring 03 April 2007

Wow.... I know exactally how you feel....that is... that is good. May need to work on rythm a bit but its good

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tom Le Guilcher

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