The day we fell apart was the day i just broke apart
The day you said no more that was day i fell in soro
What ever did i do to hurt you so bad
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Wow.... I know exactally how you feel....that is... that is good. May need to work on rythm a bit but its good
Yea I feel the same as Rebecca this poem is really good even tho I prefer rhyming poems this was really nice keep it up