Tuesday, February 19, 2008

What Death Took Comments

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Death took more than fingertips and flex of wrist.
And much more than warm mouth and touch of lip;
it stole sand, the dust of man, the very gist.
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Cathe Ferguson
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Nicola Burkett 19 February 2008

Death rips everything away and replaces it with heartache, pain and tears.... I understand the pain in this poem the day i lost my Nan.....excellent write 10/10

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Cathe Ferguson 08 April 2017

Thank you for your compliment! It goes a long way!

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