Tuesday, May 23, 2017
What Could Happen Comments
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I know what could happen.
That's not stopping me from spending all this time.
I am not giving up a given amazing for a maybe better,
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8/4/2025 12:38:11 AM # 1.0.0
Maya, I like this. The diction is plain but powerful (lightning, kickstart) . Maybe change fall south to go south? This is one of those poems that relies on the speaker's emotions to power it, not figures of speech or other poetic devices. Good one. If you'd like, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com I'd like to know what you think of it. Yrs, JC