Sunday, February 19, 2012

What Could Happen If You Buy Drugs Comments

Rating: 5.0

They'll drive by
Shoot you right there
They don't care
They'll take your life
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Dave Alan Walker
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Ramesh Rai 22 February 2012

So nice and true, a good tribute.

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(De Va) 22 February 2012

a very sad tale because it is so true....blessings

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Eric Cockrell 21 February 2012

drugs, and that whole scene, bad news... the scourge of the world! good poem!

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Badria Alameeri 20 February 2012

The poem reflects what is happing in the real world, it is a Tragedy. Nice poem, I will be looking forward to your newest word. Check out my new poems: Lost for good & unbearable

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Crimson Soul 19 February 2012

Drugs Are A Part Of This World As A Bait Is To A Fish-Those Who Need The Thrill, Or An Escape Will Take It, And Die When They Make A Mistake. Awareness, Is The Only Protection, And Even So, It Is Close To Nothing... Your Poem At Least Speaks Of What Is, And What Can Be; Not What Will, And What Should Be...

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Patti Masterman 19 February 2012

And sometimes they'll still kill you even if you paid- just didn't like your looks, lol.. I agree, drugs are too deep and much too dangerous to get involved in..good observations here.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 19 February 2012

Tragic but true. The poem tells everything that drugs can do and it all results in self-destruction.

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