Monday, March 2, 2009

What Can I Say Comments

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What can I say to help you past,
the sadness that you live,
Soft words could not erase the hurt,
no solace can I give.
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Laurie hill
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Such a sensitive poem written with wisdom and concern. The words inspire those who read it and thank you for its beauty. 10 Karin Anderson

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T S 05 June 2009

Needless to say Laurie this poem makes so much sense to me emotionaly, a lovely piece Tracy

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Sonya Florentino 18 April 2009

...you've said a lot...you've said a lot.....

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Diana Van Den Berg 15 April 2009

What a compassionate gift from a sensitive heart to one person, spilled over in Poemhunter to many! Yes, it is so heart-breaking when one wants to help, but one feels so helpless – but the comfort is that every tiny attempt makes a difference, although it may not seem so, at the time. Diana

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Anita Atina 14 March 2009

This is such a tender expression of love.

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Original Unknown Girl 12 March 2009

I think you said it all here Laurie.... Beautiful write. HG: -) xx

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Fiona Davidson 02 March 2009

Beautiful poignant write Laurie...imagery is wonderful...thanks for sharing this...10++

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