What Can I Do Comments

it's...the word is...conveying. I can almost see your hand gestures, face expressions. a drawing appeal. 'and in the justification by name of love, what takes root, one does not know...'

this is a nice way of expressing yourself indeed.....emotions seem to flow throught your pen....genuine and honest ones at that...10+ regards shan

do one thng, , make her read this poem, , she will certainly fall in love wid u

This is difrent but, realy good. I hope she see's that you trouly love her.

simple, , , yet impressive :)

A beautiful expressive print out of emotions and queries...10+++

mirrors your feelings in the most sensitive way

'what can i do its over now but it was grand i understand---' your poem reminds me of this old song a nice poem Jatin anjali

marvelous poem! ! keep writing and show us your talent..... Merna.

That's really sweet, Jatin.

this is so cute... f I love you blindly Then what’s wrong that I do? nothing... is my answer. nothing at all. I really like this, shows your feelings very well.good job my friend. Becca