Saturday, April 27, 2013

What Bribes At Death? Comments

Rating: 3.6

Sun arises, defaces darkness,
City in lanterns, gives way for the harness.
A morning begins, concludes the night:
But what more hopes, for a man in fright?
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Kevin Lee
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Susan Williams 10 January 2016

A difficult theme to control but you handled the reins of poetic direction and delivered. Well done

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Ratnakar Mandlik 10 January 2016

Marvelously penned beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Manonton Dalan 10 January 2016

hehehhehe some people are afraid of daylight..maybe they don't like to work...we millions here

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Akhtar Jawad 10 January 2016

An amazing poem, really thoughtful, a well deserved selection as the members' poem of the day.

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Souren Mondal 10 January 2016

Beautiful poem.. Struggles of life are really hard, but with hope we may overcome them all...

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Ramesh Rai 26 September 2013

Struggled for meals, with desire for life, Money was the need for the passions in life. Only an hour for the rope so tight: BUT WHAT MORE HOPES, FOR A MAN IN FRIGHT? A great write.

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Vishal Sharma 18 May 2013

so talent champ you are writing very well really so good to be your friend

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