What Bri Edwards Wants....For Christmas....And Beyond
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It's a rant, says David Wood. I think it's not; rhymes are quite good. He gave one star; I'll give it four. Total's not as bad as before.
I'm looking forward to reading about my 'rant'; thanks for the headsup, Ron. : )
Despite 'problems' on PH, esp. witihin these last (hopefully not the 'last' for PH) two years, I toast PoemHunter as a welcome member of poetry sites available, ....& this one IS free! ! ! And thanks, Readersl I see, in 'Notifications'. that Belle Wassermeister left a comment. : )
" a plush penthouse overlooking Manhattan would also be OK... as long as YOU or someone else (all of my housing bills) ... will pay! " hilarious
It's not a poem, not even verse, it's a rant and for that you get one star.
But, SERIOUSLY, WHY DOES dw SAY SUCH THINGS? It isn't humorous, it isn't true (maybe he DID give one star?) , and it certainly makes me wonder who sounds crazy, him or me? ? ? ? ? ; (
If you had one mouse in the house, there are probably more. Wait until one walks across your face while you are sleeping! Yes, that has happened to me...
I remember using pages from the Sears and Roebuck catalog when toilet paper was in short supply...
'Chum' is also a verb: to toss pieces of bait in the water to attract fish.
I too have everything I want or need. I wish every person in the world could have a roof over his head, warm clothing, abundant food and clean water, and all the necessities.