Monday, December 19, 2005

What Becomes Of A Broken Heart Comments

Rating: 4.5

You left me floating in eternity
Once again returned to the darkness I dread
Your carefully woven lies corroded
Decaying in this heart of mine
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Raven Keller
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Gregory Gunn 14 January 2006

Raven, Good to see you use 'than I' rather than 'than me' as so many people would. That is what I am a stickler about...proper grammar. Gregory

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Linda Ori 25 December 2005

Raven - Thanks for the kind words regarding 'Destiny's Child'. I also see the same sadness in this poem, and feel we must be kindred spirits. Beautifully written. Linda

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Kimberly Strothman Anderson 22 December 2005

honest and powerful, soulful

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Holly Heron 20 December 2005

Love it, you made it completely yours.

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