Monday, October 6, 2014

What Are You Now? Comments

Rating: 4.3

Are you the wind that ruffles
a silent day?

I was walking,
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Michelle Claus
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Maria Gonzalez 01 August 2015

Beautifully written. This poem is very emotional.

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Abekah Emmanuel 06 October 2014

Very emotional and touching. Sometimes, life lives us wondering of one thing or the other. You have expressed this beautifully......good job!

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Khairul Ahsan 06 October 2014

I understand from the poem's 'topic' and your note that the poem is written in remembrance of a demised friend named Tommy Oh. The poignant thoughts expressed in the poem are indeed touchy. Well written.

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