Are you the wind that ruffles
a silent day?
I was walking,
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Very emotional and touching. Sometimes, life lives us wondering of one thing or the other. You have expressed this beautifully......good job!
I understand from the poem's 'topic' and your note that the poem is written in remembrance of a demised friend named Tommy Oh. The poignant thoughts expressed in the poem are indeed touchy. Well written.
Beautifully written. This poem is very emotional.